Yabancı dil (İngilizce) öğrenme sürecime/ sürecimize katkı sağlaması için başlattığım “My English Stories” serisinin üçüncü hikâyesini de yazmış bulunuyorum 💫
Yine, instagram (hayalleregidenyolum) üzerinden yaptığım Soru – Cevap’a 8 tane kelime önerisi geldi. Seçili 10 kelime ile sıfırdan bir hikâye yazdığım için, kalan 2‘sini de rastgele ben seçtim ⛅️
Gelen 8 kelime önerisi :
Hikâyede geçen 10 kelime :
• Suffer : Acı Çekmek • Exactly : Tamamen • İridescent : Yanardöner •Deeply: Derinden • Compete : Yarışmak • Conversationalist : Hoş sohbet kimse •Goodness : Tanrı • Free : Özgür • Lovely : Güzel • Respectful : Saygılı
Hikâyemi çevirebilir, sesli okuyabilir ya da aynı kelimelerle bambaşka bir hikâye yazabilirsiniz. Eminim ki gramer hatalarım vardır, görürseniz lütfen söyleyin ki birlikte düzeltelim 🙂 Yanlış yapmaktan korkmamak gerek. Bana kalırsa bir dili öğrenmenin ilk şartı bu. – Keyifli okumalar…
School Trip and Martin
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The school bell rang, and students in the garden entered the classroom. 5 minutes later, their teacher came.
5 – A | Classroom
Teacher said “Good morning children. Are you excited about this lovely trip? ” Everybody said “Yees”. One of students raised her hand. Teacher said “Yes Kathy ?” Kathy said “Teacher, what time are we going ?” Teacher said “School bus will come here in half an hour, then we’ll go. Meantime children, when we get to the woods, please follow me. You shouldn’t leave groups because you can get lost. Okay ?” Then, the school bus came and students got in to the bus. They sang song lots of on the way. It was really fun a way for students.
Woods
Teacher said “Yeah children, we came. Get off the bus slowly, and wait me. ” The students got off the bus, and they were so excited. Spencer said “Vooov, there are too big trees in here.” Kathy asked her teacher “Teacher, I guess I’m hungry. What time are we eat things?” Students laughed and one of them said “Oh, Kathy. Always you have a question to ask.” Kathy laughed too, and said “Yeah, because I’m a curies person” Teacher said “Okay children. Listen to me! Now, you can play the game, but never move away, and be respectful for nature. 1 hours later, we will eat things. Kathy, come with me. I’ll give you an apple. Then children, We’ll go through the woods. I’ll show you different plants. Have fun.”
Spencer yelled “We are free ! Yeaaah.” Students started play game. Martin said “Hey Spencer, do you want to compete with me ?” Spencer said “How ?” Martin said “We will run until that tree.” Spencer said “Okay. Ready ? 3 – 2 – 1 Start !”
Spencer and Martin started running. They ran, ran and ran. Spencer yelled “I guess, I will pass you, Martin. Can you hear me ?” and looked behind, but realized Martin wasn’t behind. He was so scared and heard Martin’s voice. Martin yelled “Help meee, Spencer !” Spencer yelled “Martiiiin. Where are you ?” Martin said “I’m here, help me Spencer. I hurt my leg. ” Spencer saw Martin and he said “Oh my Goodness ! Martin, How did this happen? The tree branch cut your leg deeply.” Martin said “Tell the teacher Spencer. I’m in a lot of suffer. ” Spencer said “Okay, okay wait” and went to his teacher.
Hospital
Doctor suture Martin’s leg and said “Well done Martin. You are so brave. ” Martin said “Thank you doctor. I didn’t feel any pain because you are really conversationalist. I wish I was carefully. That was exactly my fault. ” Doctor laughed and said “Oh Martin, maybe that tree was jealous to your iridescent shoes. ” Martin too much laughed.
Then he saw his mother in the corridor. His mother was so worry. She said “Martin, are you okay ? I was so scared.” Martin said “I’m fine mom. Only, a tree was jealous my iridescent shoes.”
AUTHOR : Ece ÖZER
Bir sonraki yazıda görüşmek üzere, hoş kalın,
Ece 🌼
Bravo ece hanim. Bu hikaye gecen haftakinde de keyifliydi. Kucuk hatalara dikkat. Iyi calismalar. Mutlu
BeğenLiked by 1 kişi
Teşekkür ederim Mutlu Bey. Görebildiğiniz hatalarımı söylerseniz beni çok mutlu edersiniz 🙏🏻
BeğenBeğen
Rica ederim tabiki.I didn’t feel “any ” pain ( any eklenmesi lazim). Biliyorum conversationalist’I kullanmak istediniz ama “talkative ” ya da “chatty” daha uygun olurdu cunku gunluk kullanimda bu kelimeler kullaniliyor.
Spencer saw Martin ( to’yu kaldiriyoruz). See’den sonra preposition gelmiyor.
I wish I was careful ( carefully yerine). “Because” this is my fault ya da “this is totally my fault” seklinde yazardim. Exactly aynen anlamina geliyor, totally ise tamamiyle demek onun icin totally bu cumle icinde daha uygun.
.. I am in a lot of pain ( dogru kelime pain) suffer izdirap cekmek daha çok duygusal ama fiziksel aci icin mutlaka pain’in kullanilmasi gerekiyor.
Sanirim sozlukler bazan dogru kullanimi vermiyor o yuzden bu kucuk hatalar olusuyor.
Çok basarilisiniz Ece hanim. Ilgiyle okuyorum yazilarinizi. Mutlu
BeğenLiked by 1 kişi
Sanırım çoğu hatamı, kullanmam gereken kelimeler yüzünden yapmışım. Bir sonraki hikâyede buna dikkat edeceğim. İlginiz ve sabırla hatalarımı bulup belirttiğiniz için çok teşekkür ederim Mutlu Bey 🙂 💫 İyi çalışmalar.
BeğenLiked by 1 kişi
Ben tesekkur ederim m. Iyi haftasonulari. Mutlu
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